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LIzard by reaper222ofdarkness LIzard by reaper222ofdarkness
Something I did last night hope you guys like it ^^.
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ArtisOneofThem Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, this'll be a critique for Become-better. Hope it's helpful for you! :)
I'm going to do the compliments after I point out a few things that can become improved for next time.
Firstly, the background is nice, yet around the mouth area, it gets a bit not as well done -- almost rushed. Be smoother and more precise with your strokes, so that when you are blending, it comes out smoothly. You should also fill the WHOLE of the back ground with the same amount of shading.
The next thing is the neck. The presentation of your drawing would look better if the bottom of the neck wasn't "fenced" with an outline, but rather, let it fade into the darkness of the shadowy background. This will also make the viewer wonder how much more of this creature there is!
There are parts of background not touching the lizard, and that is fine, but if you're going to do that, then do it ALL around the head, and make the space reasonable, and even throughout. :)
Lastly, don't show the second eye. The angle you chose, we should only have to see the ridge of the second eye, not the eye itself.
Now on to what's good!
Your darks are wonderful! They truly bring out the highlights of your lizard, creating depth and fullness.
The eye is very well done! Simple, yet the intense expression set the picture's mood perfectly!
Great work with the scales, yet remember not to get too carried away or it will become too busy to enjoy looking at. :)
Oh yes, your proportions are well done as well!
Well, that's enough, great work, and look forward to what you've got in the future!
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reaper222ofdarkness Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012   Artist
Thank you this will be helpfule to be honest I was getting tierd so I did rush on shading a bit thank you a lot of pointers I can use ^^.
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ArtisOneofThem Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are very welcome!
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SerelyArtworks Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Hey hey Become Better is in the place!! :heart:
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HeyKim0012 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
That looks great!
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reaper222ofdarkness Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012   Artist
Thanks ^^.
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Lilronald14 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Nice :D
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reaper222ofdarkness Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012   Artist
Thank you.
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Lilronald14 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Np :)
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Evealece-Rosado Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Do I like it?? Of course I love it! This picture kick ass!!
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